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Comments on review It's a Kodak by briang
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I've heard great things about the EasyShare. Make me want one. |
thrivingmom |
6/24/2008
11:34 AM |
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See, now this is much better. Yes, it could have been a touch more concise, but I think you're getting the hang of this now. Sometimes we go to opposite extremes, and as you get used to this type of writing, you'll find you can give details as well as personal experience in medium lengths instead of very short or very long. Keep working at it! |
ChocolateLady |
5/28/2008
05:28 AM |
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You asked, so here it comes! No offence, but I'm surprised by the Execptional rating this got. While you write well and have all the facts here, for me, that's not enough. The first red light is that this is only one paragraph which isn't all that long, and that means you haven't given us real details. The more technically complex the item, the longer your review will end up being. But it isn't only about the facts. Yes, you did include some personal experience, and that is a good thing. And as they say, you can't get too much of a good thing. If I were you, I'd work on including more information that comes from your experience here. For instance, you mentioned the flash - can you be more specific as to examples of when the flash worked well and when it didn't? It might also help if you tell us your favorite features and if there are ones you haven't gotten to work like you think they should. Finally, it would be nice if you could tell us who this camera is best suited for and if it is still available to purchase and if so, where might we find it. Including this that should fill up 4-6 paragraphs and have a word count in the 400-600 word range. I hope I've been constructive here and you aren't upset by what I've written here. Let me know if you revise this review. |
ChocolateLady |
5/20/2008
05:43 AM |
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I want to buy a digital camera. I am not a new product type of person.. new hard to use things scare me, but after reading this I think I will try this camera. Thanks |
adelaide |
5/17/2008
07:34 PM |
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